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mk uncle's avatar

This is so good

Emma Newman-Holden's avatar

Thank you!!!!

John Madrid's avatar

I write in the exact opposite direction from this and still couldn't stop reading. The thing most people miss with this much excess is that it has to be controlled to the millimetre or it turns to noise, and yours never slips. Then the last movement, the ocean, the two girls, the mother thing you keep refusing, quietly goes real on you. "The marketing for myth" is the line I wish I'd written. Beautiful work.

Emma Newman-Holden's avatar

Thank you so so much John!!

elie lichtschein 👽🛹's avatar

"What I do next frightens most—I kill the closest living thing I can see. A fire ant. A death is necessary when nothing else is happening, grief is technically a funhouse." love this line esp

Benjamin Sharp's avatar

What a ride! Holy shit

Wyatt's avatar

have you ever thought about how similar you are to goku? food 4 thought.